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Me
Contributed by
caughtinadream
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:30:37 PM in AEST
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My eyes
Averted
My pain
No longer exerted.
Happiness
I have found
Since you
Have been around.
My fear
Out of sight
My eyes
Are your delight.
My beauty
Found in you.
My past
Is through.
My life
Is mine.
And you-
-Your mystery..is divine.
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caughtinadream
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2004-11-11 14:30:37]
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Re: Me
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by Overstated on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 04:06:43 PM AEST
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| i liked this poem different style to me - but it was a nice read - more than anything the poem felt real and from the heart!! |
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Re: Me
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:42:30 PM AEST
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| Interestingly written with so few words, too. Nice write! Cheers! |
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Re: Me
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:17:06 AM AEST
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| I liked this poem. Short but lovely. Much peace. |
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