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UnVisible Prints of Death
Contributed by
Alina
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:15:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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The prints of these cocaine kisses
Are no longer visible to the human eye
But at night sometimes they glow
And they still make me cry.
The prints of those heroin touches
Are gone but still there
You can't see them anymore
But if you look deeply at my veins
You can see the heroins tear.
The prints of the man I thought I loved
Disappeared with out a trace
But if you look deep into my heart
You can still see Satans smiling face.
The prints of tear stained hugs....
The prints of blood filled drugs.....
Still linger in my soul
Those unvisible prints of death
Are the only things that make me whole.
Copyright ©
Alina
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2004-11-11 14:15:48]
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Re: UnVisible Prints of Death
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by screwup on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 03:41:24 PM AEST
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I really, really like the metaphors you used in this poem. It made so much sense. This poem was just so outstanding... just simplely a GREAT write.
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Re: UnVisible Prints of Death
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by Overstated on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 03:59:41 PM AEST
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| i love the way you've wrote this poem you've made what could of been a boring poem really good!! |
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