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help him
Contributed by
amatt
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 01:24:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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he comes to school crying
no one knows why
he dont talk
no one talks to him
he leaves
but with a tear
he misses the next week of school
no one wonders about his black eye
hes in the hospital for a month
why doesnt anyone notice
that something is wrong
this boy cant be that strong
everyone needs help
but no one will help him
hes in trouble
and we are all too blind
someone help him
he cant be that strong
hes in trouble
help him
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2004-11-11 13:24:52]
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Re: help him
(User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:16:23 AM AEST
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Even without puncuation and no ending. I really enjoyed this poem. Maybe I can relate or something but I thought it was a wonderful write. Keep it up, I'd like to see what else you can do.
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