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I see YOU
Contributed by
silverjade
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 01:20:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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all the words
the useless words,
waste of breath
all die and remain dead
and so do you
for you've fallen in their shadow
and trapped you stay.
I look at you in disgust
cant believe what we've become,
dissapoint me to know iam one of you,
but i will not follow in your step
above you all I remain
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silverjade
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2004-11-11 13:20:10]
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Re: I see YOU
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by Am on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 01:46:33 PM AEST
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just one word...Deep
~Always, Am~ |
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Re: I see YOU
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by Vampy on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:19:45 PM AEST
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| I feel the same way sometimes. Nice write! |
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