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Nahlu
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 01:12:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Her story will make you sad, because her past has been so bad.
The images burn bright in her mind, how could this be she is so kind.
Who she is, is all she’s got, though I see her fading away a lot.
I don’t know why she doesn’t cry, why she let her love pass by.
I know the secrets of her pain, I know just what drove her insane.
I know she wants what she cant keep, but it’s too late their loves too deep.
I know what keeps her up at night, I’ve heard the screams she has to fight.
I see it in her eyes, she’s covering up her lies.
Who she was. Who she is.
I want to be there, I want to help.
I want to giver her freedom...
I want to set her free.
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2004-11-11 13:12:11]
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Re: Nahlu
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by Overstated on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 04:10:56 PM AEST
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| not what i expected at all!! this poem was lovely - very deep and very honest- great piece!! |
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Re: Nahlu
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:27:46 PM AEST
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| So sad. Sweet that you want to help. Blessings. |
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Re: Nahlu
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 12:23:49 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poetry! I hope you're able to set her free. Much peace. |
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