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When Dreams Aren't Real
Contributed by
givingin
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:34:19 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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When dreams aren’t real
When I wake,
I’ll see you there,
standing with flowers,
as if you care.
The love that we have,
will be so pure,
I’ll have you again,
you’ll be my hearts cure.
I’ll open my eyes ,
and see you again,
your face will be true,
but my dreams will not mend
I open my eyes,
and you are not there,
I guess I was wrong,
you never did care.
You used me for pleaser,
and I received pain,
my love is forever,
though I won’t see you again.
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givingin
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2004-11-11 12:34:19]
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Re: When Dreams Aren't Real
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by LEMMEN on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 01:41:10 PM AEST
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NICE WRITE It flowed together so well with such a sad message. Dreams they are what makes us us They are what makes us real. You have a wounderful talent> You write whats in your heart so well. Keep writing Keep feeling. Your poems will lead the way for something better to come your way." givingin "
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Re: When Dreams Aren't Real
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by Vampy on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:23:59 PM AEST
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| How sad, yet written with such simple, lovely words. Nice job :) |
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Re: When Dreams Aren't Real
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 02:04:50 PM AEST
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I think
Foolish girl would have been a good title to.
Too many girls are talked into living with a guy nowdays.For some few it works out,but mostly not.
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