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The un-named poem
Contributed by
givingin
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:27:28 PM in AEST
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The Un-named Poem
Death to the world,
and all of it’s sins.
Heaven to innocent,
and hell to the damned.
In the hands of god good,
in the arms of hell are the cruel.
The world is over,
we’ve had to many chances.
God has tried to make us beautiful,
and we’ve spat back in his face!
But who believes in god any more,
with all these suicides and murders,
it seems people prefer the devil.
Friend and family pressures,
just make you want to die!
The truth hurts.........
But so do all the lies!
Copyright ©
givingin
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2004-11-11 12:27:28]
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Re: The un-named poem
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by amatt on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 01:32:50 PM AEST
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| wow i liked that it was deep in a good way i liked it alot |
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Re: The un-named poem
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 06:57:22 AM AEST
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In this world of good and bad
I almost believe all you said
In the arms of hell are the cruel
God has tried to make us beautiful
In His image--God did make all of us beautiful.
I really liked your poem Well done
Sinned
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