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Specialness forgotten
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:24:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In the shadows of your mind
is my worth
I can find
there but barely
Hanging on to words of
emotional flattery to rise my spirits
I drown in sweet memories of when i was special
JENNI
note: I dont like this one as much lol its not as good as some
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2004-11-11 12:24:19]
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Re: Specialness forgotten
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:37:37 PM AEST
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Another great short poem, thats what i like about your poems it goes straight to the point. i love this.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Specialness forgotten
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by UnlovedChild on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:48:31 PM AEST
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| This was a great poem! I was in the moment and you brought me back to good times, which even though I'm young, were so long ago. |
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Re: Specialness forgotten
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by emystar on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 12:29:00 AM AEST
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Sad but well said.
I happy it's an old one.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Specialness forgotten
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by midian on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 11:55:04 AM AEST
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| Wow.. I'm not really into short poems but this was lovely i really enjoyed it... Nice Write |
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Re: Specialness forgotten
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 10:59:24 PM AEST
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| a piece does not deserve a name until it is perfect. if you dont like it, then revise it till you do. a poem is only as good as the writer lets it be. |
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