|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
crying of my wounds
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:21:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
Sleepless I stare up at you
as you look at me in disguist
should I leave or should i stay?
I ask this of you everyday
crimson eyes from crying
you watch me bleed
you want me to scream
I shudder in a corner licking my wounds
JENNI
Copyright ©
PhantomVampyress
... [
2004-11-11 12:21:52]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: crying of my wounds
(User Rating: 1 )
by thepos on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:59:38 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Get to the point! There's no ending! I read poems like this every day. No deferent then the others. |
|
|
Re: crying of my wounds
(User Rating: 1 )
by Am on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 01:41:00 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
good...it leaves the reader wanting to know more...
~Always,Am~ |
|
|
Re: crying of my wounds
(User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:51:10 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wow great write. I cried. Thanks for the emotion. |
|
|
Re: crying of my wounds
(User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 07:58:45 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
It is true that your poems 'seem' to have no ending... It almost seems to me that they feed into the next. Don't know if I'm right but I like them.
Besides endings mean that it is over and if it is not over how can it have an ending? |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
