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Oak Tree
Contributed by
Fluffhead
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:55:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I saw you there
Under the old oak tree.
You said your name was Chase
You were a new face.
You were always happy
So fun to be around.
We became fasdt friends.
You held me when I cried
We laughed and had good times together.
You made my heart smile
When you said the words
I love you.
So happy for so long
But it ended on night
It happened so fast
We had crashed.
Bright lights and a kiss good-by.
Now I sit here
Bitter sweet memorys pass through my mind.
Tears of lonelyness and pain
Fall from my face
Under the old oak tree.
Copyright ©
Fluffhead
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2004-11-11 11:55:12]
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Re: Oak Tree
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 07:18:38 PM AEST
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Hurtfully sweet
Probbaly not ment to be
Fluffhead move on
A true love will come
filled with emotion good write
Sinned |
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Re: Oak Tree
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:15:36 PM AEST
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| Harder still for being bored when they aren't around, I bet. Good wriite! |
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Re: Oak Tree
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:11:08 AM AEST
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A few spelling errors- easy to fix. A very nice message and story very sweet poem. I enjoyed this very much. Thanks for sharing. I'll be looking for more writes.
--amanda-- |
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