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Whipped
Contributed by
rockshv
on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I’m not what your think
I have feelings too,
I know I am not perfect
Nothing like you!
Think I’m all stone
Throw it all my way,
I’m an ugly demon
Who’s here to stay
I have not hurt you
Or let you down,
Question my love
When I’m not around
I try so hard
To make it right for you,
Nothing is good enough
I constantly lose
I start thinking
That maybe I should leave,
But you’re so persuasive
And the man of my dreams!
She says you never loved me
That I can’t accept the truth,
I’ve tried to let go
But it’s too hard to choose!
Your always making me cry
I’m never in the mood,
I feel like nothing
Right next to you
You have it all
The wealth and looks,
You have my word
Everything you took
Let’s make this right
We’ve gone too long,
I’ll do it for you
I’ll ignore the scars
Copyright ©
rockshv
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2002-11-20 22:40:00]
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Re: Whipped
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:56:00 PM AEST
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This one took me back in
time, to a place where i felt
this very same way about
someone, Thanks for sharing
this one, I really enjoyed it
It showed me alot about the
things i thought i done wrong
that really i didnt.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Whipped
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 03:47:54 PM AEST
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| I liked your poem in was good. |
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