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Silence
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 10:06:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Rain drops pouring
on my face.
I catch them in my mouth
savoring the taste.
Air giving me a chill
deep down to the bone.
Wish you were here
I hate to be alone.
The cold silence of this day
is deafening.
Wish the feeling....
Would just go away.
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deadheadpoet
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2004-11-11 10:06:32]
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Re: Silence
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 10:08:59 AM AEST
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awww that is really sad, well written ,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Silence
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by emystar on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:33:07 PM AEST
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Awesome writing.
A bi sad bu we all have these days once in a whille. You captured your feelings well.
huggs,
emy |
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