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Hollow Whisperings
Contributed by
Satrianus
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 07:37:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Out of sight, out of mind, that’s what she will never be.
Even if it’s the final end. Salvation will set her free
Just as her train passes the last station, and we say our last goodbyes,
Precious memories buried in our hearts will soothe all our cries
The voices from heaven were whispering her name
She left this earthly world, but her spirit still remains.
She still lives on in all of us, in all our hearts
Never will we forget, never will we be apart.
Hollow whisperings running through in our heads.
The feeling of being left behind with so many things unsaid.
Contemplating and reminiscing all the times we had
It’s probably better this way, but we still feel sad
Thinking of all the battles you fought, day in day out.
Never giving up, never surrendering, without any doubt
Death has finally caught up with you this time.
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Satrianus
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2004-11-11 07:37:02]
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Re: Hollow Whisperings
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by TheNextRobertFrost on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 08:31:03 AM AEST
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touching. very nice work. keep it up.
TB
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Re: Hollow Whisperings
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by screwup on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 09:21:31 AM AEST
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very touching indeed. i liked the sudden ending, seemed to fit the poem just right.
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