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The Knife
Contributed by
lonelypoet08
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Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:15:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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The knife is so good,
Yet is so bad.
It takes away my pain
When I'm down, when I'm sad.
It distracts me from all emotion
That seems as big as the ocean,
And you're stuck in the middle.
You're so small, so little.
It's like an addiction.
It controls all your thoughts
Until you realize it.
It's hurting you a lot.
On the arm
The scars will always stay.
I just wish
All the memories would go away.
No more memories shall I make.
That's why this knife I take,
And when I destroy it
I will cry a little bit,
But it will get better.
I will write her a letter.
I will tell her I'm better
Without the knife.
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lonelypoet08
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2004-11-11 00:15:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Knife
(User Rating: 1 ) by mylastwords on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 01:02:22 AM AEST (User
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great write...i liked the rhyming...i can relate to this poem...coz i used to be a cutter...it is like an addiction...i still crave for my knife...it was my release...but i do know that without the knife is better...keep up the great work...
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Re: The Knife
(User Rating: 1 ) by humboldtsweetie33 on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:59:38 PM AEST (User
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really good poem. i liked it alot. im really glad that you dont cut any more. ive tried to stop but it never works out. congrats toyou for being so strong! great poem.
ttyl lyl xoxo bye bye
maddy |
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