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She Was Here
Contributed by
ETrojan08
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 10:05:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She was here
I was there
We were near
We loved and hugged
She tugged on me
I felt in love
It was so false
I was lied to
She was granted the truth
I was denied
She knew my feelings
Thought I knew hers
I expressed myself
Unleashed myself
In the end
She was here
I was there
Copyright ©
ETrojan08
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2004-11-10 22:05:18]
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Re: She Was Here
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:47:13 PM AEST
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very well expressed .. that happens sometimes.. this is short and to the point .. Sorry things ended that way for you ... there is a reason for everything .. you will find the right person..
Peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: She Was Here
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by Row on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:58:01 PM AEST
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| this has a real nice style to it, and really works well when ur reading it, just rolls along with a nice pace |
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Re: She Was Here
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 03:54:14 AM AEST
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great poem!...i'm sorry about you and your girlfriend though. everything happens for a reason.
keep writing great stuff |
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Re: She Was Here
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by alexb on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 09:37:01 AM AEST
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| great poem, sorry about it though, keep up the good work |
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