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MY LOVE(SHE SAID YES)
Contributed by
LEMMEN
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 09:11:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm tired of hurting.
I'm tired of the pain of being alone.
That's why I am so glad,
GOD GAVE ME YOU.
He knew my hurt.
He knew my pain.
He knew I was planing my death.
From the very first time,
I spoke to you.
I felt something special.
I didn't know quit what it was,
Till we started talking more.
You have filled,
A very dark and lonely,
Not just a spot or a hole,
But a place, My whole soul.
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.
These word's are just a token
in saying thank you,
For loving me.
I really have never truly had anyone
truly love me beside blood.
I cry in writing this to you.
These words need to be wrote,
Not just said,
But written.
My whole body cries and said
I LOVE YOU
And if it is in my power to do anything
for you it will be done.
I LOVE YOU MORE THAN GOD LOVES YOU
May you always know this,
By the words I write,
and by the actions I show.
And by the love I have for you.
And I ask you now for future time I
know will come please
MARRY ME
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
LEMMEN
... [
2004-11-10 21:11:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: MY LOVE(SHE SAID YES)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 09:24:15 PM AEST (User
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Touching write......filled with emotions..
Jenni |
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Re: MY LOVE(SHE SAID YES)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chanti on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 10:04:56 PM AEST (User
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Aww!
beautiful write, she must be a very special person. Congratulations!
-Chanti |
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Re: MY LOVE(SHE SAID YES)
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 06:05:39 AM AEST (User
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Aww thats so sweet, your such a good guy lol. congrats.
hugs,
jane |
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Re: MY LOVE(SHE SAID YES)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Deathly_Rose on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:16:34 AM AEST (User
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oh my god, that's so sweet. Madonna is a very lucky girl to have a guy like you. Tell her I said hi, and that I hope that you two can keep up the relationship.
*~Alicia~* |
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