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Crying Inside
Contributed by
scottishdancer
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:10:44 PM in AEST
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Crying inside I yearn for you
Never knowing if I'll see you again
The world is hurting and in such pain
You leave to fix the wound
I respect your wishes and support you
But deep inside I hate myself for it
I stay strong for you
And don't let you hear me cry
But inside I am always crying for you
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2004-11-10 20:10:44]
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Re: Crying Inside
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by cocacola1331 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:22:53 PM AEST
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| I feel for you, and I hope that your fiance comes back well! It's a beautiful poem. |
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Re: Crying Inside
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by lovethecolorblue on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:33:48 PM AEST
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I will pray for you and your Fiance...For some reason I feel an angel around you guarding you in these tough times . Stay strong, it will be ok...You can email me any time.
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Re: Crying Inside
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:51:03 PM AEST
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aww i understand you just miss him and this is well expressed.. beautifullly written I hope he returns home to you safely
peace and hope
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Re: Crying Inside
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:39:05 AM AEST
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I wrote this for a friend whose fiance is also fighting in the mid-east right now.. I'd like to share it with you.. I loved your poem and my heart goes out to you.
My Heart Is Weeping
We were standing together, side by side,
looking in the mirror.
It was time to say good-bye.
Your eyes were filled with tears,
you held them back.
One of us had to be strong.
My heart was weeping.
To help you,
I choked the tears back in my throat.
That was the last time you went.
Our country calls you once again,
and it’s time to say, good-bye.
No thought for yourself,
although you do think of me.
And that brings the tears
once more into your eyes.
It’s still a month away,
but every night that passes,
ends another day,
and your departure
grows that much closer
and my heart weeps again
as I try to stay strong.
©a_bear2004
I wrote that for them just before he left to go..
but your poem reminded me of it for some reason. He's coming home and I know yours will too. |
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