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Hello Stranger
Contributed by
n0body
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:39:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Hello stranger, it's you I'm yet to know,
So don't hustle by, steady up and take it slow.
This world is so big and bigger it will get,
And you are my stranger, because it's you I’ve not met.
Hello stranger, are you in this crowd?
This clump of people busy and loud.
I'll keep my eyes peeled, in case you fly by,
Because I need to meet you in order to die.
Hello stranger, I came like I said,
To where you would be, like the directions led.
And now here I am, looking for you,
Searching for that someone I never knew.
Hello stranger? You said you would go!
So why can't I find you, because it’s your face I would know.
Hello stranger, it's you I've not faced,
So,
Goodbye stranger, I guess it’s me you’ve erased.
Copyright ©
n0body
... [
2004-11-10 19:39:30]
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Re: Hello Stranger
(User Rating: 1 )
by Silent_Storm on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:50:38 PM AEST
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HEY! I remember seeing this in your notebook! Of course, then, I was not allowed to see it. I really liked it! ^_^ Very interesante...
(P.S. Hallo, I'm Nate, and Today on Pokemon, we're gonna take a look at the most useless dumb creature-the KEVO! Kevo: errr eRr ERR) |
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Re: Hello Stranger
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:32:28 PM AEST
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| wow...this was an amazing poem... I liked it alot. the words flowed so smoothly great job and keep writing |
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Re: Hello Stranger
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 04:23:27 AM AEST
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| excellent poem! it flows really nicely and it's beautiful. great job! |
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Re: Hello Stranger
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by EternalNight4x on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:27:29 PM AEST
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| Nice write..liked the ryhiming! keep it up |
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