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You Never Know what you have Until it's Gone
Contributed by
Deathly_Rose
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:15:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You never know what you have,
Until it’s gone
As friends, is how this relationship started.
Our lives went the same way, and never parted.
Games were played,
Friendship grew, look what it made.
Soon, together we were,
Everything before, became a blur.
We held hands as we walked,
Amongst our friends we talked.
Some say we had a special gift, that I won’t deny,
It was our moment of pure bliss, all the pain swept by.
Gifts were given, and received,
All our cravings were relieved.
Rambling was heard around the room,
I could feel it in my head, it was splitting in two.
It’s none of their business, so why do they care?
All of these words, are making it hard to bare.
I walk up to you, as from my eyes a tear,
It came out, oh so fast.
“I thought you cared! I hope you had a blast!”
I turned around, and walked away,
Leaving you alone, to your own dismay.
For week after week, we did not speak,
For your friendship, I did not seek.
“I didn’t cheat on you, but if that’s what you think, then good-bye to you, good-bye to you all.”
You turned around, and stomped away, leaving me in the hall.
I noticed those girls just wanted what I had,
Those words they spoke, made me so mad.
So here I sit, on this lonely green lawn,
And I figured out “You never know what you have, until it’s gone”
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Deathly_Rose
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2004-11-10 19:15:51]
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Re: You Never Know what you have Until it's Gone
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by butterbuns on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:23:53 PM AEST
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Dude, that's...awesome.
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Re: You Never Know what you have Until it's Gone
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by cocacola1331 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:27:38 PM AEST
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| Man, that is good. Keep on writing... is it just me, or does writing about things that hurt you come so easily? To write about what hurts me, is such a well, satisfying way of letting all the emotions out.... |
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Re: You Never Know what you have Until it's Gone
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:24:58 AM AEST
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| this is so sad, but as u said, so very very true |
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Re: You Never Know what you have Until it's Gone
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:12:26 AM AEST
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Great stuff. Some of the best poetry comes from love lost, it's great to get it all out of your system. Good write.
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Re: You Never Know what you have Until it's Gone
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by EternalNight4x on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:08:40 PM AEST
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| well written...very emotional I loved it...leep up the great writing |
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