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Obsession
Contributed by
ZiltzWiltz
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:46:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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EYES watching every movement
HEART longing deeply
MIND like a camera capturing every expression
SAME OLD thoughts every night
SLIGHTEST TOUCH felt forever
EVERY WORD written down to never forget
SADNESS felt until the chance to love comes.
EYES filling with tears when truth sets in
HEART ripping to pieces when struck down
MIND growing exhausted with relentless ridiculous wish
SAME OLD tears cried every night
SLIGHTEST TOUCH burns when lost
EVERY WORD not said aches
SADNESS felt until the decision is made to breathe the last breath.
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ZiltzWiltz
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2004-11-10 18:46:34]
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Re: Obsession
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by Chanti on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 09:05:58 PM AEST
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Great write, loved the style.
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Re: Obsession
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:29:08 AM AEST
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| awesome, i love it, great write!!! |
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