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Catalyst
Contributed by
SuicideParty
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:20:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Youth is wasted on the young
Each death, another song unsung
The silence bears our secrets well
A thread of hope too thin to tell
The fears we guard so no one knows
The pain we feel but, no one shows
The graves we dig to pay our debts
The times we live for our regrets
The truth we try so hard to hide
The world in which we can't confide
The faith we lost when first we fell
Transcending hope, we ran to hell
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2004-11-10 18:20:28]
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Re: Catalyst
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:30:29 PM AEST
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| Smooth flow and rhymes. Well written. It definitely fits the category of "emotional poetry." The matters which you touch upon are so very true. It's quite sad that the world works like this. = |
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Re: Catalyst
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 02:40:36 AM AEST
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| awesome i love it, you have so much talent!! |
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Re: Catalyst
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:34:17 AM AEST
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| I picked this to read because of the title. I really need one right now. "The world in which we can't confide" All too true. *sighs* This was really meaningful. Blessings. |
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