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Time Unleavened
Contributed by
Ooniegirl
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Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
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oops
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Weak droplets of rain residue
succumb apathetically
branches slouched
like shoulders
from the weight of wet
the complexion of autumn
dulled colours washed and faded
clouds fused
like an impenetrable blanket
of melancholy
smothering sullen hills
essence of sodden ground
deaden thoughts
of a mystical winter
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2002-11-20 20:00:00]
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Re: Time Unleavened
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by Rage on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 02:35:43 AM AEST
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Wow! Great vocabulary! Great write!
~*~RAGE~*~ |
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Re: Time Unleavened
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by colette on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 04:09:42 PM AEST
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girlFRIEND,
just the thought of a mystical winter has considerably brightened my oh so dreary day.
'the weight of wet'. best i've read in a long while. you have not only the gift of gab, but the gift of language. gorgeous. |
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