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Dictionary
Contributed by
n0body
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:12:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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There is a book that lives by my bed.
Reminding me that 'future' is the definition of dead.
Telling me things that are beyond my sent,
Speaking in oblivion like an open vent.
Destroying my body and building my mind,
teaching me words impossible to find.
Giving me everything though I want none,
making me wonder how this begun.
I feel like a robot and I think I’m one too.
Tin, smart but broken, made to serve you.
If I am a robot, knowing so much,
does that give me a I clammy steel touch?
I’m built to be smart, but I still want to know.
Know why this robot, is still trying to grow.
Robots weren’t built with a mind of their own,
just to think for you and build you a throne.
Robots are ugly and can only rust,
But if I am a robot, then what is this lust?
Copyright ©
n0body
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2004-11-10 18:12:21] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dictionary
(User Rating: 1 ) by sid_the_tampon_fairy on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:41:45 PM AEST (User
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I positively LOVE this! Oma! It's beautiful and it speaks to many! Thank you! Wonderful!
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Re: Dictionary
(User Rating: 1 ) by Silent_Storm on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:21:50 PM AEST (User
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Wow! Nice job, San! I loved it! ^_^ I especially liked how it rhymed. Plus, your word selection was excellent! Pfft. Ya right, you don't suck at writing poetry and you know it!! |
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Re: Dictionary
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladymaki on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 12:15:08 PM AEST (User
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This is an awesome poem! One of the best I've seen on here! |
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