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One Day
Contributed by
BlackAngel
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Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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One day I'll be happy
One day I won't cry
One day I'll smile
Like the sun shines
One day I'll be bright
And one day I'll be cheery
But until that day
I'll be sad and lonely
For now I'm dark
Today I don't smile
Like the sun shines
I'd rather kill the sun
Along with all the happy people
This is how I am now
And that won't change
Until I die
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BlackAngel
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2002-11-20 19:00:00]
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Re: One Day
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by lost_word on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 08:06:48 PM AEST
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| great write very sad, i know how it feels.. keep ya head up. |
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Re: One Day
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by RealCrystal on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 02:05:06 PM AEST
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That is how I feel and how I like to be sometimes
I think to be sad
is good for the soul sometimes |
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Re: One Day
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by buchi on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:36:33 AM AEST
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| The four initial lines arrest the attention at once by a quiet dignity of manner, an air of placid contemplation, and fluidity |
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