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Bleeding Sin
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 02:52:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Slice the blade through fragile flesh
Let it bleed till nothing left
Drain the blood away from the veins
Bleed until there's no more pain
Pale, ghost skin has no turned red
From all the problems that have bled
A burning sensation
A relaxation
Joy in watching blood spill from within
Content with life enclosed in sin
Copyright ©
EternalNight4x
... [
2004-11-10 14:52:00]
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Re: Bleeding Sin
(User Rating: 1 )
by cocacola1331 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 03:23:33 PM AEST
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Devin...
I love your poems, but this one was really well, deep... it kinda freaked me out because i never really knew.... i know (i think i do) how you feel, but really, instead of doing that, you should just .... not do that? idk, but devin, i'm here for you.... you can talk to me you know, saying as i love to talk. anyways, god... take care of yourself, dev.... |
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Re: Bleeding Sin
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by Somnium on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 01:46:40 PM AEST
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This is fantastically well handles and written
Bravo
Ben
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Re: Bleeding Sin
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by inspiredhearts on
Friday, 2nd September 2011 @ 12:57:26 PM AEST
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dark,inspiring,painful enjoyment
great writing. |
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