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Cruel Demise
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 02:46:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Your cries echoed throughout the room
As I brought you upon your doom
Your limp, cold body hit the ground
With your blood spilt all around
I cannot say I have regret
For death you soon still would have met
Yet I made sure it was I
That brought amongst your cruel demise
Copyright ©
EternalNight4x
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2004-11-10 14:46:23]
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Re: Cruel Demise
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by cocacola1331 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 03:39:25 PM AEST
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| wow, this one left me speechless... idk what to say about it. a little ***** at life/someone when you wrote this? haha, jk, i love you, you're the best dev.... |
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Re: Cruel Demise
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:09:15 AM AEST
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| Very dark! but i actually quite like it. i |
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Re: Cruel Demise
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by Lips on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 04:38:15 AM AEST
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| I really like this... i enjoyed every line! |
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