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Fallen Sparkle
Contributed by
ravenblack_phoenix
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 02:18:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Here on this paper
I'll spill unto emptiness
My tears and blood and very essence,
For the love of thee.
With prose released, spun,
I'll enchant thee into my web,
It's glitter and shine
Like stars fallen from heaven;
Those stars that fell
Oh so gently unto thee,
Tainted by my lure,
Sparkle deep within thy soul...
And so thy heart is given, softly,
Into my oh so loving hands,
And I'll hold thy gift,
Thy heart, thy beautiful and gentle heart,
In reverence, tenderly,
Hiding it close to mine,
I'll kiss thy soul,
Kiss away thy tears, thy fears,
And we'll meld into the beauty of one-
Our souls dancing, frozen in time,
Touched, by that fallen sparkle.
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ravenblack_phoenix
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2004-11-10 14:18:12]
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Re: Fallen Sparkle
(User Rating: 1 )
by Minerrva on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:24:36 PM AEST
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| This is a lovely piece. Truly from the heart. |
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Re: Fallen Sparkle
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 07:52:07 AM AEST
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| i like this poem. it is beautiful and has a beautfiful choice of words. however i feel its quite hard to read as it doesnt flow as well as it could. but i can tell it has true meaning and i like that. |
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