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Tear Rimmed Eyes Lit by Moonlight
Contributed by
brokensoul
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:37:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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tear rimmed eyes lit by moonlight
the evening heavens boring down on her face
secrets leave her weeping
in her confined space
the moon speaks to her
while she waits silently and still
it reads into her soul
knows everything she came to feel
she falls to the ground
left in an unconcious state
her subconcious is spinning
awaiting her fate
the sleeping girl wakes
with tear rimmed eyes still lit by moonlight
hoping for a pull from her intuition
staring off into the night
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2004-11-10 13:37:49]
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Re: Tear Rimmed Eyes Lit by Moonlight
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:42:01 PM AEST
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a dark write, bey tinted with some beauty,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Tear Rimmed Eyes Lit by Moonlight
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:21:47 AM AEST
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| I admire the way you have disguised a person with something in which is abiotic... beautiful personification and symbolism. |
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Re: Tear Rimmed Eyes Lit by Moonlight
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by flamingblade on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 02:45:48 PM AEST
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very nice metaphor
it's dark, yes, but it's lovely
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