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Life without you...(true experience)
Contributed by
givingin
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:17:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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LIFE WITHOUT YOU
Killing me,
raping me,
watching me,
haunting me.
This is what you do,
I fear my life,
and do not live,
for I always think of you!
Get out! Get out!
Stop taunting me,
my mind so clouded,
I can not see.
Your face is magic,
I love you so,
your voice so soft,
you let me go.
I spoke the truth,
and got you mad,
now my life is all but glad,
Come back sweet love,
caress me once more,
for I won’t survive,
since my life is now torn.
Killing the light,
in which we once lived,
Surrender my fight,
My life I now give.
I wish I was right,
and you would come back,
but I know it’s not true,
cause compassion you lack.
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givingin
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2004-11-10 12:17:13]
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Re: Life without you...(true experience)
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:18:53 PM AEST
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very sad, sorry you had to go through this, it must have really hurt,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Life without you...(true experience)
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by Red_October on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:52:26 PM AEST
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| Your poem is very strong, a great way to take care of your emotional spirit. Nice write. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Life without you...(true experience)
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by Novocane on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 05:24:59 PM AEST
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pretty good, too bad a lot of girls have to go thru a relationship with some a-hole who only wants their body at that age :-/
happens to my friends all the time :(
otherwise, good poem :) |
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Re: Life without you...(true experience)
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by Sinned on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 04:39:44 PM AEST
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Tremendus poem great write.I felt your pain,but know you gained.
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