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The Girl Without A Face
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:16:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I am the girl without a face,
Don’t really fit in any kind of place,
Feel abnormal, more than a little bit strange,
Wish that there was a way I could rearrange.
Pain has ravaged my face & my heart,
I don’t know where I end & hurt starts,
We have morphed into one messed up being,
From me all my love is fleeing.
When people look they see a blank expression,
One that’s been created by the devils obsession,
My beautiful hair is falling out in clumps,
Out of me the demons are tearing lumps.
My once sparkling blue eyes now hollow,
Only down the dark paths do I follow,
There’s nothing left for me here,
In the still I can hear death creeping near.
My rosy lips no longer speak kind words,
Everything but evil goes unheard,
I am the girl without a face,
In me any good there’s not a trace.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-11-10 12:16:03]
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Re: The Girl Without A Face
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by givingin on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:46:18 PM AEST
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very good, sad read... I can relate.....
* tear *
*~givingin~* |
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Re: The Girl Without A Face
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by _Raspberry_ on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:54:27 PM AEST
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Oh, sweety, this is a very good write, very sad.
*hugs*
~_Raspberry_ |
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Re: The Girl Without A Face
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by Red_October on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:59:38 PM AEST
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| loved it, felt it thoroughly. great write. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: The Girl Without A Face
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:42:53 PM AEST
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| a good write..hope it's not true. I see and read a lot of goodness in my little pix. :-*) |
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Re: The Girl Without A Face
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by justjonesy on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 05:43:04 PM AEST
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| Really really good poem....love it....sad....but obviously great |
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Re: The Girl Without A Face
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:00:42 PM AEST
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| everything but evil goes unheard...yes it does...your work is so powerful and well written....you touch a forgotten area of the soul..... |
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Re: The Girl Without A Face
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by pander on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:35:04 PM AEST
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In me any good there's not a trace.
I can't believe the above is true of you. I know there is a huge amounnt of good inside of you. I know this because I have been lucky enough to be on the receiving end of your kindness many times Pixie.
*Big hugs to my dearest friend*
Lots of love,
Pander
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Re: The Girl Without A Face
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by Kie on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 06:33:35 AM AEST
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If you can write something like this than there is good inside of you and a conscience.
We all lose our way but, you have to blaze on.
It is soooooooooooooooo much more fun to work towards being happy than to constantly be unhappy.
Just my cent for the day...
Kie (Who thinks your face is lovely) |
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Re: The Girl Without A Face
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:24:58 AM AEST
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Auh so sad....but what an excellent piece. Dark stuff. I hope u see better days ahead. Feelings of the inner being very well portrayed & poetically put together in almost song like fashion. Very gripping.
Corinna |
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