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no emotion
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:01:47 PM in AEST
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what can i do
i dont know how to feel
the pain has left
but the presurs so real
what do i do
i feel noting at all
even after
the long hard fall
theres no emotion
no love or hate
nothing at all
nothing to await
so bluntly new
the pain is gone
with no emotions
nothing seems rong
i like this emotion
maby it will stay
maby ill forget
the pain in yesterday
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2004-11-10 12:01:47]
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Re: no emotion
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:03:33 PM AEST
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good flow, well expressed write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: no emotion
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by allymp on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 02:34:43 PM AEST
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| great poem... |
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