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Looking Out
Contributed by
tractorbabe
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:57:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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looking out
cloudy and gray
nothings remembered
from yesterday
though one ear
out the other
as they talk
my mind wonders
looking out
into the world
the wind blows
the leaves twirl
my soul drifts
the darkness is tight
i feel the wind
like a cold summer night
opean air torn
the pavement lay
still not raining
its dark and gray
all i feel is the
spirit in the wind
my mind wakes up
and its hungry again
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tractorbabe
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2004-11-10 11:57:40]
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Re: Looking Out
(User Rating: 1 )
by mylastwords on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 12:51:11 AM AEST
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beautiful write...i really like this...its simple, and said perfectly...random topic..but i like it...i love your work...keep it up...you are really talented...
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Re: Looking Out
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 09:00:28 AM AEST
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nicely written...you kept nicely to the form, good use of words & rhyming, simple yet good...nice job...
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