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I’ve been painting the walls with blood again…
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:42:40 AM in AEST
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They’re flaming their grudges.
I close up and see torn images.
A blood shell.
Flowing from a bleeding hell.
A screaming mess.
A blade never at rest.
I’m cutting it all out.
Removing the bleeding shouts.
The blade is cold.
It’s tight in my hold.
Blood stains fall down me.
I’m feeling faint, feeling weary.
Needing some one here.
But needing also to disappear.
My brain mashes.
Sending further crimson flashes.
More blood rivers flow.
… I have the release that I loathed.
I look around me.
In tears I just bleed…
I’d lost all control.
I had felt like ending it all.
I feel so ashamed…
I’ve been painting the walls with blood again…
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2004-11-10 11:42:40]
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Re: I’ve been painting the walls with blood again…
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:43:46 AM AEST
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wow that was deep, great expression,
pixie xx |
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Re: I’ve been painting the walls with blood again…
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by LEMMEN on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:22:47 PM AEST
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"INTENSE" A blade never at rest. That is so true for thoses of us who cut. I know I feel the pain of the blade but it dosen't match the pain we feel inside. All I can say is keep on writing getting your feelings out share with the world let them know what your all about. "NICE WRITE" you express yourself and your sadness just know your not alone "deathdrop"
~~DENNIS~~
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Re: I’ve been painting the walls with blood again…
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by screwup on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:27:29 PM AEST
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Rosie,
this one left me absolutely speechless, with tears in my eyes... this piece reminded me of some of my darkest times. you did so well with really expressing your emotions in this poem... I applaud you.
~Deanna |
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Re: I’ve been painting the walls with blood again…
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by StoneAngel on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 05:28:21 PM AEST
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| deep and scary, wow. |
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Re: I’ve been painting the walls with blood again…
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:05:14 PM AEST
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| yeah it's scary.....but so is the pain....and with your words....i finally get it.....if i had the the courage to....i'd paint the walls also....and maybe the pain inside could flow away.....brilliant work my friend..... |
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Re: I’ve been painting the walls with blood again…
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by allymp on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:02:56 PM AEST
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very emotional...im sorry...
nice write |
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