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Why...?
Contributed by
littlelaura15
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:32:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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Why do I feel like my whole life is a mistake?
Non- existent, totally pointless, for nobody's sake.
Visualizing a future seems distant to me,
In fact I dont think I can record it as a memory.
Why do I feel like Im just 'there'?
Blending in the background.... nobody seems to care,
No purpose, no reason, just there,
As feint as a ghost, nobody seems to care....
Why does sleep seem like the best thing for me?
Like an apothecary's recommmended remedy?
Slip away into my own dreamland forever more,
After all what am I really here for?
Why does Dad not want to know?
Is it the drugs, the drink that make him feel so low?
Perhaps it's just me, always seems to be,
I suppose thats clear for everyone else to see.
Why did Mum take her life away?
Is it because of all the 'wrong' things I say?
I want her back so much for now and forever,
Missing her is proving too hard to cope with, at least for forever.
Maybe fate is calling upon my death,
Don't worry, not for long people, you won't be hearing my breath,
Everything is my fault , why do I mess things up so much?
At least if I die I'll be reunited with my Mum's soft touch......
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Re: Why...?
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:36:22 AM AEST
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a very deep and emotional poem you have written.,it called out to me as I am feeling very down at the moment.. expressed well,
takecare,
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Re: Why...?
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 04:51:37 PM AEST
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| I hope you aren't really contemplating this...it isn't what your mum would want..it isn't your fault.. but when we do things like take our own life, we leave people with guilt so it's something to think about.. nice reminder. |
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