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MADE A GOOD DAD
Contributed by
LEMMEN
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:31:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Children I shall never have.
Painful laden is my heart.
Dreams of a family life torn
apart.
Never knowing the true joy
of one's flesh.
Never having a child this
pain is great.
Sometime to much to bare.
Man should have the right.
God has taken mine from
birth strip me of the seed
of life.
Never shall I know what kind
of dad I might have been.
Rage, Anger, Some of the
emotions.
Am I a true man without
a child to bare my name.
Boy or girl either would
please me.
But it's only a dream.
The nightmare of life.
It hurt's.
The pain is great.
I really think I would have
made a Great Dad.
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
LEMMEN
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2004-11-10 11:31:36]
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Re: MADE A GOOD DAD
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:26:35 PM AEST
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very sad but there are other ways you can be a dad there are children in this world who need your love I do understand how you feel as Im not a mother as well a touching heartfelt poem
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Re: MADE A GOOD DAD
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 03:14:53 PM AEST
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This is heart breaking....I know the feeling from a woman's point of view.... I wrote a poem called From a Man's point of View ( I think)...Mabe I'll repost it soon.....
This is a good write...shows your eelings very well......and it is the answer to my question.....
Welcome to YPDC....
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Re: MADE A GOOD DAD
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 04:54:16 PM AEST
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| why can't you be a dad to someone who would make a good child that needs a father? thousands are crying out who need a father. Or must the child look and sound like you and have your genetic marker? |
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Re: MADE A GOOD DAD
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by Rxqueen on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 06:23:47 AM AEST
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| Hey Lemmen, I totally feel for you. I was told I would never be able to have a kid and look at me now, I have a three month old. But my parents were also not able to have children. They waited 7 years on an adoption list to adopt me. I am so grateful to them. I have such wonderful loving parents you wouldn't even know. And I completed them. Like everyone said, thre are millions of children who need people like you, who would love and cherish them. Maybe you cannot have kids for that very reason. Maybe fate has something instore for you better then you could have even imagined. Good peice, very sad. |
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Re: MADE A GOOD DAD
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:05:55 PM AEST
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Adoption is such a good thing. Not just babies, but older children too. They are the ones that need love and acceptance so badly. An adopted child is so special because they were chosen by the adoptive parent, not just conceived. Consider that or Big Brothers/Big Sisters to children that need a moral boost and some self esteem also.
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Re: MADE A GOOD DAD
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by Deathly_Rose on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:13:41 AM AEST
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Awww, this poem is very well written about a topic that most people wouldn't know what to say.
You really did a great job on this poem. Kepp up the good work ^.^
*~Alicia~* |
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