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What Harm Could It Do
Contributed by
siren
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 10:21:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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"What harm could it do?"
Is the last thing you spoke
Before you opened your lighter
And started to smoke
Yes what harm could come
From getting one great high
Who knew you'd get in your car
And make it your time to die
But it wasn't just youself
Who had to die that night
You took three others with you
To join you on the final flight
So was it worth it
My love, was it that great
Or did you not realize
Until it was too late
I still remember your words
"What harm could it do?"
Well, my dear friend,
It did more harm than you knew
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siren
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Re: What Harm Could It Do
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 10:31:26 AM AEST
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WhOoa SoRry To HeaR thaT U LoSt YoU'Re FrIenD.. BuT THeRe's NoThiNg TO Do.. BuT StIcK bY yoU'rE FrIeNdz I guEss.. Im TruLy soRry
GreAt PoEm DeEp SaD
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Re: What Harm Could It Do
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 10:38:18 AM AEST
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this was a really good poem... it was sad...
i'm so sorry that you lost your friend...
~!*!~hugs~!*!~
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: What Harm Could It Do
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:01:27 AM AEST
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i'm sorry to hear that you lost your friend too.
this holds a strong messege.
it's really good too! |
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Re: What Harm Could It Do
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:23:29 AM AEST
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sorry for the loss of your friend, a deep and emotional poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: What Harm Could It Do
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by x_midnight_x on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:26:57 AM AEST
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good write :)
may i ask what harm did it do?
i'm not sure i understand how/what killed them?
canabis?
a lit cigarette?
sowwy silly me...too curious i guess ;) |
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Re: What Harm Could It Do
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by Siren on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 02:24:11 PM AEST
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| to answer the question, he was on drugs that night and crashed the car. It really made people in my town realize that there are risks involved with drugs. |
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Re: What Harm Could It Do
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by allymp on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:08:07 PM AEST
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very emotional poem...im sorry for your loss
~ally |
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Re: What Harm Could It Do
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by Rxqueen on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 06:28:03 AM AEST
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| God that creeped me out. In high school there were these five best friends, very popular girls, who dies in a car accident. They were doing whippits including the driver and the crashed into a tree and they all died. Ve |
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Re: What Harm Could It Do
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by lovesucks on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 10:54:40 PM AEST
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Wow, I have said those exact words "what harm can it do?" and it almost happened to me. I was saved and I want to thank you for sharing and letting me remember so vividly. I am so sorry for your loss. You are an excellent poet and look forward to more poems by you. Great write very expressive, very true, very real.
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Re: What Harm Could It Do
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by behindblueyes987 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 01:10:41 AM AEST
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| Both very good poems your meter is nice and you don't try to hard to rhyme or sound profound like so many others on this site (gah they make me sick) you are very talented keep wrighting and your works will become more polished with practice. |
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