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He Experiments With Death
Contributed by
solmyr1404
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:55:02 AM in AEST
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He experiments with death,
It facinates him.
Too many pills at once,
Slowly increasing doses of the powdery white drugs
He takes through his nose,
Always drinking Vodka and Jack.
He experiments with death,
He enjoys it.
Kills small animals for fun,
Then drinks their blood
Mixed with his own,
Just for pleasure.
He experiments with Death,
He studies it,
Drawing ever closer
To its inevitability
With his constant drinking
And his volatile mix of drugs.
He experiments with Death,
And Death experiments with him,
Chooses him,
And in the form of a raven,
Takes him,
And now Death is him.
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Re: He Experiments With Death
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:57:13 AM AEST
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very sad and deep write, dark and vivid,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: He Experiments With Death
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by Flipped_out on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 09:39:27 AM AEST
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| I liked this one..quite funny really, kind of a mini Jeffrey Dahmer biopic |
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Re: He Experiments With Death
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:21:27 AM AEST
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sad...so sad...yet so many people seem to be experimenting with death...i know i have...i enjoyed it...but at the moment it is in the past...
awesome job bro!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: He Experiments With Death
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by LEMMEN on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:47:51 AM AEST
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"VERY POWERFUL WRITE" I have to agree with the Jeffery Dalmer comment. 'He experiments with Death' is something I think we all do at some point in our lives. At least I have. I liked this poem. It is truly a "GREAT WRITE" "solmyr1404"
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: He Experiments With Death
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by kailadragon on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:44:01 PM AEST
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| this poem has a great overtone of danger...........i don't like it......the poem, or the thought behind it.......caution yourself bryan........don't do anything you'll regret in the future....-ash |
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