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HE RAPED ME
Contributed by
LEMMEN
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:49:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
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He raped me with his word's.
He made me feel as if I was
a princess then took it all
away and put the devil in me.
He told me all I wanted to
hear.
His word's were ever so dear.
Now I hide in fear.
Always looking back to see
if he is near.
Broken is my faith.
Broken is my dream
in men.
Never do I wish to see another
man's love within me.
He raped my mind,
He raped my soul,
He raped my body,
With the word's he wrote.
I hate him my the devil bring
him pain.
I fear the outside world as
well as the in.
He took from me my last hope
of dignity.
Now my tears are reality.
The little joy I had is completely
gone.
All I can enjoy now is the pain
of him raping me.
With his word's,
With his body.
He told me he loved me.
It was just a game he played.
Never did he want to be my
friend.
He just wanted my sex from
me.
Now I wish I could die.
He took it by force.
I was to blame.
I let him he knew my pain.
He listen he had just the right
word's to say.
He raped my mind,
My soul,
My body.
I let him,
I am to blame.
Never shall I let another man
within me.
Never shall I trust again
ALONE I FOREVER, AM.
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
LEMMEN
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2004-11-10 08:49:12]
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Re: HE RAPED ME
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:55:23 AM AEST
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wow this was so powerful and deep, made me feel so sad to read it,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: HE RAPED ME
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by givingin on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:59:53 AM AEST
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I feel for you... I really truly do.
this may sound crazy, but in this poem you described everything about how I feel because of one man in my life....I know we've never met.
But I can relate......
and I thank you for righting something like this, it put's it all into perspective.
*~givingin~*
ps. you should read my poem (life without you) when I post it.
Please comment back.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: HE RAPED ME
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 09:02:50 AM AEST
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Such an old and sad story.
My heart goes out to you in your pain.
There are so many of us who know exactly how you feel.
Hang in there. Healing is possible...not easy, but possible.
Saying a prayer for you,
Stitch |
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Re: HE RAPED ME
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by Flipped_out on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 09:35:06 AM AEST
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"He raped me with his word's"
Although a powerful write indeed I did not understand this line...
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Re: HE RAPED ME
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 10:43:22 AM AEST
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This was a great write, but i just like to say something i been in ur situation, but never did i give him my soul.. I couldn't ever trust another guy ever, stayed in the dark.. But till i meet my fiance a guy that never gave up kept his words never failed me.. But i kept brushing him away because i couldn't trust another.. But i came to a conclusion of where i had to forget my past and move on.. You're past is always an experince to be learned always.. So take it as if it was a lesson to be learned no matter how hard it is for you.. I know it is hard and rough.. But good luck to you
and great poem
Made the reader really feel what you are going thro..
HeNo UnKnOwN bUtTerFly |
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Re: HE RAPED ME
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by Deathly_Rose on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:44:05 AM AEST
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Hey, I really enjoyed reading this poem, you put what other people are too scared to say, into words. For evrybody who's had to go through this experiance, I may not have, but I think that it shows what they go through day in and day out. Thank you once again
-Alicia |
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Re: HE RAPED ME
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by LEMMEN on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:29:18 PM AEST
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Thank you all for the comments. But I am not a woman. I was told this by a woman online. So I wrote a poem for her and how she must feel.
Again Thanks to all for your comments and to others who read Please leave a comment
THANK YOU
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: HE RAPED ME
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 03:17:48 PM AEST
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Great write from a woman's perspective.... You are very talented...
Jenni |
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Re: HE RAPED ME
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by StoneAngel on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 05:08:36 PM AEST
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| This is exactly what happend to me. the guy minipulated me, pretended to be my friend and as soon as he got what he needed he left. That was my real fist time. You write some very powerful poems if I do say so. Wow. |
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Re: HE RAPED ME
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:15:50 PM AEST
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| evil touched her that day......i know...it's painted its' mark on me.....may she feel peace one day.......and you should be commended for understanding with enough empathy to convey this for all to see......you are an amazing person.....thank you for putting it all into words.....when they take.....they take every single piece of us away.....and then we are left to put the puzzle back together......awesome write..... :* |
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Re: HE RAPED ME
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:36:33 PM AEST
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| powerful. |
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