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Bohemian
Contributed by
anonymous_skies
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:05:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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They always wanted something new, catchy, or extreme
Even if I may have tried I am but who I am;
Traditional, yes, to a fault, old lyricist supreme,
(At least that's what I like to think instead 'an old ham')
I call the moonlit silver mist, dancing in the beams
And spell the sunlight golden rain, in ever-flowing streams
Love is that forever lost, but to-be-unearthed gleam
Strand within the fabric that awaits between the seams
So call me one old wimpy man, the meek and fearful lamb
Deem me obsolete and crude, rusted beyond dreams
Because I cannot spill a spiel and double down my dram
Trust me friends, I've tried it all, but I am, who I am.
Copyright ©
anonymous_skies
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2004-11-10 08:05:46]
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Re: Bohemian
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 09:23:40 AM AEST
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This is nice stuff. An impressive first post. I look forward to reading more.
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Re: Bohemian
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:31:44 PM AEST
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very good poem
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Re: Bohemian
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 06:29:41 PM AEST
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| awesome.. this is so beautiful, i love it. |
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Re: Bohemian
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 03:39:49 AM AEST
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Bravo! I like this one. I, too, am who I am. Individualism has a hold on me, but it's a good thing. What would JRR Tolkien have written if he had conformed? Keep it up, in life and poetry.
Slàn
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