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Head Up Shiny Stuck
Contributed by
Rxqueen
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:21:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Oh god I did it again
whatever
who cares
I love to do it again and again and again
head hurts
stiff neck
out the window
gagging
sweats
shaking
regrets
but its not what you think that I am thinking about
you're wrong
like always
I'm right
like always
head high
forever in a cloud
forever
coming down
not ever
being here not there in everyones way
take me away
wake me
in a cloud
of dispair
head hurts
it burns
the life has melted
to form a puddle
of love
i slipped
i tripped
head hurts
pound pound pounding now
help me out
help me down
head
head hurts
Its calling
i'm falling
down from my cloud
where my head
it hurts
but it rested there
not here
where you be
take me down
without my cloud
to breathe in
the sky is falling
i'm not flying so high
Im dying to get high
I wish
but i hate
what i am
to be have been are am become
alive not
in this place
head hurts
it pounds
stiff neck
dizzy dizzy
done done
now go go go go go
drive fast
i need to finish
myself
NO
good bye to my cloud
my cushoin
my pillow
catch me
i'm falling
it's calling
fix me
fix
fix
I need my fix
head hurts
hand me the needle
im fixed
fixed
fixed
in my cloud
head high
i'm high
so high
not coming down
you can't reach me
i am
where i am
to be
to belong
all along
it was there
don't ever
bring me down
again
let me down
again
leave me here
with my one true friend
silver and comfort
and sharp but sweet
taking away pounding head
lifting me off my feet
to my cloud
where i sit
and am am am am alive
but dead to the world
head up
head up
don't try to bring me down
I am already flying head high
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Rxqueen
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Re: Head Up Shiny Stuck
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:46:43 AM AEST
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So you were a heroin addict, too? *confused*
You mention 'we' at the beginning. Tell me if i'm wrong, because this whole write seems rather realistic - not, of course, that I've ever been a smack addict. I know several, however . . . and I guess this may well be somewhat accurate.
Well written, if a bit vertical . . . |
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Re: Head Up Shiny Stuck
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:50:14 AM AEST
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*has read it again*
don't ever bring me down
again
let me down
again
leave me here
with my one true friend
*understands now* |
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Re: Head Up Shiny Stuck
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:54:44 AM AEST
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whoa!!! im having shivers. Jocelyn wow that was hard and real made me feel like I was the drug addict. This has a good flow and it made me shiver lol.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Head Up Shiny Stuck
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:51:43 AM AEST
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wow that was so powerful, you made us the readers feel everything,
takecaree,
pixie xx |
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Re: Head Up Shiny Stuck
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:19:31 AM AEST
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| Not only a great job at putting yourself in his place, but getting it down on the page so realistically!! |
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