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Cherry Scented Dreem's
Contributed by
Kreeping_Beauty
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 04:05:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A blakk stone heart
Surrounded by rusting barbed-wire
It never used to be like this
But now he’s stopped loving you
& it hurts so much as the ire skrapes
Along raw ski
Piercing lines of cherry stained dreems
Of what kould of been
Why spend so much time abusing yourself
When you know he’s not thinking bout you
But about that pretty gurl
With the perfekt smile
Shimmering eyes
& milk white wrists
You kan never see razors in her nightmares
Copyright ©
Kreeping_Beauty
... [
2004-11-10 04:05:22]
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Re: Cherry Scented Dreem's
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:52:58 AM AEST
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great expression, this was so sad, so very emotional,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Cherry Scented Dreem's
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:43:24 PM AEST
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| This is a good write. There are enough spelling errors it was a little distracting, but still very good and emotional. Cheers! |
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Re: Cherry Scented Dreem's
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by XxCrYiNg4YoUxX on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 08:14:52 PM AEST
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| This is a GREAT poem..I love it. To be upset and broken hearted from the doings of one guy is one thing i know very well |
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