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Typical Me, Typical Day
Contributed by
Delusions_of_Grandeur
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Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 06:00:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Looks of concern follow me each day
just because my act isn't on
doesn't mean there is something wrong
but if there was could you really tell?
More often then not though, there IS something,
but no one ever notices when the feeling is true,
just trivial matters, I can deal right?
Wrong
no one is that strong, let alone me.
Teenage trials,
typical, no?
the troubled youth on the rampage again,
but it's just not the same.
In moments of silence I slip into shadow,
a creeping darkness spreading within,
and then you look over,
I put on a grin
and everything's fine,
or is it?
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Delusions_of_Grandeur
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2002-07-19 06:00:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Typical Me, Typical Day
(User Rating: 1 ) by Thumbsucker on
Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 03:36:01 PM AEST (User
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Hi D_of_G,
Another good title, another good poem.
I hope whoever you have in your life notices kido. Sometimes life gets in the way and they just can`t see. Don`t be afraid to talk to them first.
Take care. Thumb |
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Re: Typical Me, Typical Day
(User Rating: 1 ) by Blue on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 10:56:38 AM AEST (User
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Hey, this is a really, really good poem...
I know exactly how this goes.
You should read some of mine...
*sorry for the blatant self-promotion*
But this still is an awesome poem. |
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Re: Typical Me, Typical Day
(User Rating: 1 ) by nightrider on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 09:42:31 AM AEST (User
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i really liked this. i can eally realte to this right now. thanks for writing! |
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