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Letter to a Father
Contributed by
justjonesy
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 02:44:59 AM in AEST
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Pardon me,
if I could get a minute or two
I know you don't know me
But I have some things to ask you
How do you survive so heartless?
What's your secret and what's your plan?
Is it walking away?
Because I heard that you ran
How do you turn a blind eye
and accept that you're hollow?
You can bite the bullet
but it's harder to swallow
Have you ever been regretful?
or even reflective?
Because a father without a son
sounds a bit defective
Copyright ©
justjonesy
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2004-11-10 02:44:59]
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Re: Letter to a Father
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:52:56 PM AEST
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| good write. angry, cold, bitter. just the flavor I like..shaken together..sad. |
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Re: Letter to a Father
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by zenmind on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 06:14:38 PM AEST
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Sorry to hear that your dad hasn't played a central role in your life. It's not fair, and you have every right to be sad and angry. I hope that one day you will be able to reconcile your relationship with him, or at least find the support through other people that love you.
Be True,
zenmind |
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