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There is no future... only death
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:33:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm not going to make it.
This breath might be my last.
I rip at my face... I tug at my hair.
I scream out in silent pain.
There is nothing left...
I've lost it all...
I'm in this alone.
It's my last resort.
I've got no friends and no one cares.
I just want to be normal...
To be pretty, to be wanted.
But it's not going to be that way.
And it never will be.
I'm in this alone and it's my last resort
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Re: There is no future... only death
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rxqueen on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 06:28:28 AM AEST (User
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Good poem. But you don't want to be normal, normal is boring. And sometimes being pretty stinks. People want you for your looks not for your inner beauty. And suicide is not a resort. It is a weakness. If you want to be wanted to have to be strong and have confidence and think positive. If you are always thinking negative thoughts the energy that surrounds you will be negative. And it will be if you try, don't ever give up, and you will see, trust. Good write. I hope you get through this pain. |
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