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Pink and Lifeless
Contributed by
girltranscended
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:18:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I am a layer in the woods
stuck on earth
sucking blood and
drenched in merth.
I am an animal, mere and mortal
enslaved to Mother
pink and lifeless
run for cover.
Faerie folk are all akin to the workings of our mind.
For there it dwells, the bequethed, beheld,
the lightening bug of time.
Our passages and round-abouts gently flow to one,
we are but merry travellers,
we are our Mother Sun.
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2004-11-09 23:18:02] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Pink and Lifeless
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 02:06:13 PM AEST (User
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This has a strange dreamy-like quality to it. "Lightning bug of time" is a neat phrase. Cheers! |
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Re: Pink and Lifeless
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 07:24:59 AM AEST (User
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Definately more than just a nature poem....well done! |
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