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My Valentine For You My Dear
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 07:23:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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you visualize what you call perfect
and it never became real
i always thought of you as a dream
a cry id never feel
you decided to realize the truth of me
the lie i lived inside my mind
we never knew the troubles before us
and the ones we left behind
if ever we needed a warming touch of skin
we would both run to eachother
passion is not what we are lacking in life
we have both found a true lover
giving the world for you wouldnt be enough
to show you what i want to do
id give it all then wait for more to give
and all of this because i love you
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abnormalpunk
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2004-11-09 19:23:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My Valentine For You My Dear
(User Rating: 1 ) by SoRrYifOrGot2SMiLe on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:19:02 PM AEST (User
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true love...and u so perfectly dipicted..."we never knew the troubles before us and the one's we left behind"...amazing, with a songwriters flair...i loved it |
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Re: My Valentine For You My Dear
(User Rating: 1 ) by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 07:32:49 PM AEST (User
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This was an awesome piece
Mason |
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