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The Same Tomorrow
Contributed by
pander
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 07:01:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Today I lost the will to live,
There's nothing else that I can give,
Life took it's toll, tore me apart,
And smashed again my broken heart.
Today I lost all that I had,
But nothing now makes me more sad,
From the inside out I know I'm dying
From the endless days I've seen her crying
Today I failed the task I'd started,
I feel so useless, broken hearted,
I love her so, though she loves me not,
She just finds solice in alco-pops.
Today I dragged her from the gutter
I bit my tongue, not a word I uttered
But I just can't do it all again,
See her getting wrecked, ending up the same.
Today is the day I caught her lying
But to help her was I really trying?
Maybe somewhere now she's slumped in a heap
Maybe that's the reason I still can't sleep.
Today I had to let her go
But it tore me apart just to leave her so
She seemed not to care as I walked away,
So I just carried on, I just couldn't stay.
Tomorrow I'll be tired and weary,
With a heart so heavy, trying to look cheery
But still I'll pick her up again
And still she'll blank me much the same.
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pander
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2004-11-09 19:01:57]
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Re: The Same Tomorrow
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 07:31:03 PM AEST
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nice flow, really feel the beat here
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Re: The Same Tomorrow
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:02:58 AM AEST
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aww Pander this is very touching, I am feeling very down and this poem screamed out to me, so much emotion and feeling used in this poem.,
*BIG HUGS*
takecare friend,
love pixie xx |
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