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Shadow of my Past
Contributed by
Deathly_Rose
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 06:12:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The shadow of my past
I see you there amongst my dreams,
But as we know, nothing’s what it seems.
I wish we could be together, free as we can be,
Nobody else, just you and me.
As we walk down the dark road, we laugh and we cry.
I look at you, all full of joy. How much longer until this passes by?
I don’t want to leave you, I never did.
Where were all of those emotions, which you hid?
I toss and I turn,
With nothing to earn.
I fall to my knees,
Amongst those dreams.
“I thought you loved me” I say as I cry,
Amongst all the screaming, I hear you sigh.
“I did love you, but that you doubted. I didn’t want it to be this way”
I look in despair, but it’s far too late, he’s gone now. I have nothing to say.
“I HATE YOU!” I scream as loud as I can.
He turns to face me, with skin so tan.
“If that’s how you feel then let me be.”
My eyes fill up with tears; I love him still, that he can’t see.
I chase him down the road so dark,
Chasing a shadow, who once held our loving spark.
I run up to the disappearing figure, and try to touch his back. I ran so fast.
The shadow faded, but all that I was chasing was the shadow of my past.
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2004-11-09 18:12:37]
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Re: Shadow of my Past
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by arden on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 07:07:19 PM AEST
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Chasing a shadow, who once held our loving spark.
I run up to the disappearing figure, and try to touch his back. I ran so fast.
The shadow faded, but all that I was chasing was the shadow of my past
omg.. those lines sent a shiver up my spine. i love this poem.
it was utterly amazing. your verse was flawless.
i think i read the poem at least 3 or 4 times, and still i feel like reading it again.
i loved it. great talent. wonderful write.
5 stars.
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Re: Shadow of my Past
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by Silent_Storm on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:14:20 PM AEST
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| I really liked how you told it like a story and was able to rhyme through it! Not to mention that you used the perfect words to give the reader a picture in their head. |
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Re: Shadow of my Past
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by butterbuns on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:49:53 AM AEST
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Awesome...just...Awesome.
~ Saskia |
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Re: Shadow of my Past
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 07:34:37 PM AEST
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| Interesting poem! |
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