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Life After Death

Contributed by crash on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 05:00:05 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I took my life in haste
just wanted to be with you
But now that it's happened
I know that could never do

I thought if I took my life
in your memory
that we could be together
for eternity

But that's not how it happened
I still walk this earth in vain
I never realized my leaving
would cause soo much pain

I looked at my body
as they tried to revive me
then I looked in my mom's eyes
so dark, so empty

She knew that my soul was gone
That my body was dead
But how could her life end
when it was I that bled?
When I took my last breath
you were the only thought in my head

How could I be so dumb?
Why did I die then?
Now my mind wanders
on what could have been

I took my life
becuase without you it was too tough
I can see what was to be my future
It wasn't going to be that rough

I was going to be a dad
a real family guy
but on the day I lost you
I just decided to die

I had a son on the way
it wasn't going to be that bad
but now he grows up
just mom, no dad
Now I spend eternity
on what I almost had

I look at all the pains
wanting to die again
then my eternal agony
finally kicks in

the 2 of us had planned forevr
with so much love, so much mirth
But i can see what was meant for me
It binds me to this earth

My plans have failed me
It has been a milenium since I left
Now I sink into the darkness
of Life After Death

Copyright © crash ... [ 2004-11-09 17:00:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Life After Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Deathly_Rose on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 06:51:26 PM AEST
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AWWW I love it ^.~ it's extremely well written, I love it... I dont know what else to say =S

-Alicia

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