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Empty Soul
Contributed by
crash
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:37:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Each song on the radio
hits me harder than the last
Each one that plays
reminds me of the past
So many relationships
that everyone thought would last
I haven't seen them all
in such a long time
but I remember each one
with every rhyme
I feel more pain
with each one I remember
I feel so cold
Like alaskan december
I bury my pain in the bottle
I take another draw from the bowl
With all my pains I wonder
"when will I be whole?"
How can I go on
living with an empty soul?
I go on living
I am an empty shell
This life of mine
is a perpetual hell
I lost my will to live
so long ago I can't remember when
all i have are my thoughts
playing over and over again
My body is dying now
I will never be whole
but how was I expected
to live with an empty soul?
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crash
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2004-11-09 16:37:13]
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Re: Empty Soul
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by joe-joe on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:42:32 PM AEST
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| I can remember very vividly when I was in this place that you write about, thought I would never survive but I did... very nice write, I can clearly see the picture... |
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Re: Empty Soul
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by romayne on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:43:22 PM AEST
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| Good Poem, but never give up on anything. Romayne |
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Re: Empty Soul
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by Irish on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:49:41 PM AEST
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| Whoa... deep writing. I know what it's like to feel empty inside, it just kinda eats away at yeh. Good poem. |
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Re: Empty Soul
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by screwup on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 05:01:34 PM AEST
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sounds a lot like what I'm going through... good write though sad.
~screwup |
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Re: Empty Soul
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by Jenn2004 on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:13:14 PM AEST
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| I loved this poem, it was awesome good job. It sounds just like me how i feel. |
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Re: Empty Soul
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:04:26 AM AEST
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very deep and sad, please be strong,
takecare.
pixie xx |
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Re: Empty Soul
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:28:18 AM AEST
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Love this poem. It's a masterpiece.. your poems are very good and I like reading them. This poem was very sad and depressing but very deep and emotional as well.. Bravo!!
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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